Class note - teacher education /writing

第一次覺得英文寫作很有趣 :O
Tom Romano 是一位很熱情與生動的老師,
http://www.users.muohio.edu/romanots/Links.html

Strategies to try in bringing " second genius" to your writing

* Creat mind pictures
* Add sensory detail

--> ex: big Mouth Spring bubbled up, and you'd put your face down there and suck. It was like a liquid crystal ball, cold on your lips..."
* Improve sound and rhythm
Add precise words and interesting language
* Pump up your verb
--> ex: Did she go into the room? Or did she walk or limp or shuffle or dash or stride?

* Change the lead
* Vary sentence length
* Placement and Payoff (bignnings and endings)
* Weed the garden

最重要的是 trust your Gush!!!

寄件者 Arriving Miami University

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